All Comments on 'All in The Family Ch. 02'

I love well thought out and well written incest but this is neither

Apart from a bit to much background with the golf etc, the sisters going at it was hot , now get the mother in there too.

Great story but you need to have your stories proof read, not that i have much room to talk. Keep it coming :)

Very good. It really made me hot. I see many possibilities here for more chapters.

I liked the story though I felt the ending was a bit abrupt, that is unless there's going to be a couple more chapters to clear up all the dangling ends.

that Daddy should get with Karen and maybe her sister - then bring in Mike and his wife - and of course bring Marie back into the fold - that could fill up quite a few chapters - don't you think - keep em cumming LOL

Not a bad story, but I didn't like the ending.

but then it just dead-ended. Doesn't make sense! As others have stated there were so many opportunities for future developments but nothing for years, bummer

DKP