All Comments on 'All in the Family Ch. 02'

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ansdguyansdguyalmost 12 years ago
Really?

I'm sorry, but NO man could possibly get it up and off that many times. Sis is nearly a virgin and suddenly she fucks like a pro. Seriously, you must keep the action somewhere near realistic, even in fiction. The dialogue was sub par, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
It's true!

Almost every male up to at least 30 can regain an erection in very little time and in many cases you can unload and stay hard and keep fucking. I've done it many times in my past and I speak from experience. It doesn't mean that those who can't are abnormal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
agreed

Ya i can cum 6 times a day just back jerking lol!!!!!!!!1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Life

Some people can enjoy sex 20 times a week ,others10, others5, others3, others once.some once a month. So take your pick and stop complaining. Just enjoy what someone has joyfully written. Sherlock didn't know everything.

Keep writing Please

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 12 years ago
My God

That shower scene was truly awesome.

Why can't porn be written that hot.

I envy your friend.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
Very hot and erotic

A super storyline that is well written.

With the two of them having so much sex while they are by themselves, I hope that they can find a way to love each other when their parents come to the cabin.

Thanks for the very good read...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice...

I am surprised they waited so long though. Would have been more real to life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Beautifull! A good continuation of the first chapter.

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