by callmejack
crab... the story was killed already... I dont see any love anymore, just lust!!! and goes to group sex!!!!!!! crabbbbb.. where is love?
I love these stories, and I loved that they were in love but group sex is boring! I know this is a written lorn site, but these stories always felt like more. There needs to be more intimate moments, and more about the parents.
-just my opinion! Still love it and will love any others you do!
swapping proves there is no love because if they really loved each other they wouldn't want or need anyone else ever. thanks for ruining the story loser.
This was a stupid story you should have made this story make more sense.
Characters in this story:
1.Dania( Amanda's daughter/ Dan's step sister/ mother of Dan's kids
2. Amanda(Miranda's and Jacob's daughter/ Dania's Mom
3. Dan( Dania's step brother/ lover
4.Dan's father who's name you never bring up
5. Cecile( Dan's mother/ other woman
6. Miranda(Amanda's mother)
7.Jacob(Man Miranda had an affair with/ Amanda's father
When are you going to finish this? It says to be continued.
..... that so many good stories on here never get finished ? It's just so disappointing when it happens - and it happens far too often.
I've been giving this 4 and 5 stars, but had I realised there was no ending, I wouldn't have bothered starting it. Given the last chapter was published in 2012, I can't see it ever being finished now.
Just so very disappointing. ............
Excellent story I hope that you will continue this series sometime.
Have just finished rereading this story for perhaps the third or fourth time. Would like to see a continuation and eventual conclusion to this story. Thanks