All Comments on 'All in the Family Pt. 02'

She might have twins one could be the fathers and the other one the sons. Thanks for sharing.

The plot is good, even the side story about the high school friend. That said, there's very little difference between the chapters.

Nice start you left a lot of room to have another chapter or two. Hope you will if for no other reason than to tell if she is pregnant and if Bobby will ask the other woman out lots of places you could take this story from here.

Yep looks like this story can go on

Love the first two parts - so many ways to go from here I hope you continue to develop these plot lines and characters. Thanks for a hot, good read so far!P

Should take Lorrie for a ride and come home smelling of another woman. Get inside Step-mommy's head. Make her admit she wants more then a once in awhile lay. Give her two or three kids with Dad knowing that Bobby gave him those children. then while not sleep with Step mommy he can stretch his wings with others like Lorrie & others.

FTDS