All Comments on 'All Inclusive - Day 01'

HOT

Loved your story. Keep writing, I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Great effort, really enjoyed this story, hope you get some more chapters written soon!

Quite hot, in some places a bit too rough for my taste though.

Enjoyable read, well written. Nice balance of a woman who knows what she wants with a false submissiveness which makes a hot and erotic mix. Thanks Harmony - hope we get more.

Awesome read especially for your 1st post. Please continue this story and please share other stories of yours as well. If this is really a true stories as you mention, you are one fabulous women. Thank you luvstolickapuss

Wow so hot, I read part 2 first but came back to read this found this to be even hotter more more more please

This would have been a 5, except for the verbal name calling