All Comments on 'All-Inclusive Summer'

Second read is even better! 10/10

I think the other commenters have covered all the great points about this story, includind what didn't happen with Wendy. I'm mildly curious about whether the inadvertent "Teri" was a reference to a real person. I got hooked on your writing in "The Accidental Nudist Cabin." Well done, again!

Engaging story, well told.

Great story. Only complaint is the category. If 40 y/o is mature, I guess that makes me, at 66, a friggin dinosaur. LOL. Kidding. Very engaging story.

Bravo! I am very stingy with 5s but this one earned it easily.

This author has written some erratic/enigmatic stories and some unfinished long ones; so in 5 years I kept looking elsewhere and never tried to read all of them.

This is the third of his stories I count as a top ten all time favorite; along with 'The Accidental Nudist Cabin' and 'Charity Begins Next Door.' The latter could make a great family movie with the little bit of sex cleaned up/implied.

My top five are swelling!

Great story with a non-incest orgy!!!

Loved it-my second read, and just as hot as first time

very likable characters, flowed easily, not forced, and glad he and Wendy didn't get involved

while the girls being bald very probable-didn't see it mentioned explicitly-disappointing Beth and Allison were too-love women that keep it natural

and as I love redheads, Fiona was fun, and her revelation some guy came at a business meeting impressive tribute to her...and now he has her number...lucky dad...!

TTT one of the top writers in Literotica. Would have liked Claire to have been more fully integrated within the story. Perhaps through Fiona? Expansion/series might also include not angry, ladies of varying races, temperments (amenable to improvement of attitude) and social or economic status.

Fantastic well written story. Would have loved a sequel seeing how Adam gats on once back home but don't think that will happen now. 5 stars

Fantastic loved every bit of it.

Wow! Excellent story. I love how the father daughter pushed it to the edge without going over. Well done! Would have liked to see mire chapters involving him and the girls. Perhaps his visits to college.

More like trailer park trash with a whore for a daughter

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Nonstop fun!

This story deserves a follow up, finding love with giona, or else beth... 5 stars

Great story, couple of slips with the names though.

Delightful story. A great bed time read.

Something doesn't sit well with me when Donna gets her back blown out in the morning then turns around and blows dudes in the club that night. I had penciled her in as the nurturer archetype and then she is a bit loose and breaks my heart.

Great!!!!!

LeB

I just read this beautiful story again. Still as the first time!

But what happens when Wendy and Dad get home? The pressure will be on after a few days and they really miss the comfort of their relationship. And how does Donna fit in?

We really need a closure to this with another chapter to this terrific story!

LeB

[11.10.22]

Hawt und Zzspicy!

11/10!!!!!

5 stars +++++. Seems you have not written/submitted a story in a few years. Damn shame. This story was outrageously sexy, amusing, funny and hot hot hot. Wish you were still writing.

Calls, Begs, for a second chapter. Fiona...Donna... lots of strings to tie up!

Totaly far fetched but OH so good, nicely put together, nice plot line and characters and descritions.

Incredable fun filled story about need and of last. Good for him for drawing the incest line and keeping on his side. I saw my 20yr old daughter having sex with her best friend. So erotic but wrong to me. We ignored it and life went on.

Another 5 star winner!

I haven’t been watching the dates, but I hope I’m not nearing the end of TxTT’s stories. His tales are intense to say the least.

Bill S.

Loved this story. You need to expand it with another chapter that includes Fiona and the three girls for the rest of the summer.

Luuucckkyyyy, and fun. rk

great story !!!

Great story and easy reading but the pervert in me would have like the Father and the Daughter doing it. I know it has been a while but I would like to see another story of all of them after they got home.

Great sex story with one older gal and 3 eighteen and over young women, one his daughter! Think they were competing with the rabbits with all the sex but good story. Baton Rouge Cajun Guy

3rd, 4th, or 5th time enjoying this wonderful and fun story!!! 10 ⭐️

I enjoyed every word in this story. Just a fabulous all ariund loving and hedonistic adventure. It made me thrill all over. I would love to read a sequel. Great characters and fantastic writing.

Cookie

Fantasies abound... Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Fabulous!!

Great one right here. Only got lost at Teri. 5* anyway.

Your mingling of the sex into the mundane is extraordinary. I have been separating the sex from the goings-on. You are excellent at all of this.

That's a great "Tall Tale!" I loved all of it - and I hope you're really going to be doing more stories. Soon!

So, that said, I want to let you know that certain things are kind of jarring, but not enough to earn less than 5*. As another comment said recently, "Teri" was not one of the girls, originally. The other minor things that were jarring were even less important - you just need an editor, and I will volunteer, if you are still interested in continuing to write erotica. Just reply here, I'll check back!

Some things I loved... Wendy is bi, maybe even more lesbo than not, though that could be changed easily in any new installment. The other girls are, too, obviously, and I loved that they really kept it to just a few, rather than fucking all the girls they know. And you merely hinted (barely) that Tina is nearly a look-alike for Wendy, which allows the reader to create their own image of incest with the gorgeous daughter he loves. And I will insist on imagining that Donna is going to come around regularly, to fuck his lights out.

Finally, the character of Fiona is fantastic. I loved everything about her, but especially her face looking "glazed like a donut" after all the girls had multiple rides on her 👅! I did kind of regret that she didn't insist that he come kiss her while it was fresh, especially since the final rider was Wendy. He could have simply LOVED the taste of daughter pussy on her, and licked her face like an ice cream treat! Which could obviously still happen... Especially if he's going to have Fiona (and Donna!) in his bed regularly!

What a load of complete and utter bollocks. I loved every word.

Only slightly disappointed Adam didn't cross that final taboo with Wendy, but we can't have everything.

5 Stars on a great story . I hope he and Tina joined the mile high club . I am a happy member of that club thank You Cathay Pacific .

Tall tale fantasy. Reminds me of boots bullshitting FNG's in the Army. Always bigger and better competitive sexual lies. Whats bigger and better than a threesome with gorgeous teenage beauties? A FIVESOME with teenage horny beauties and stunning redhead Milf! Yeah, sure...

Did I miss something? Was Fiona able to orgasm from oral with Adam? If not, that's weird that she'd only be able to orgasm with a woman. I get that she couldn't get there from penetration, but ... I mean, oral is oral?

Great fantasy. Should probably give his daughter her fantasy. There are good reasons for the incest taboo but……. She is asking. She is not being forced, they are not planning to run away together or have kids. And Capchacha sucks.

A good fun fantasy! Quite a tempting challenge for father & daughter!!!

That was a pretty sweet story.

not very likely in real life but .... one hell of a fantasy . a little daddy daughter action wouldn't have hurt either .

This is a really good story to just relax into, a favourite to read again.

This was one great fucking story to cum multiple times to. What a cum dream true, if it ever happened to me.

Great story but what happened after they got home? Who else joined their group? Did he finely fuck his daughter? These are questions readers want to know.

Another great story. I truly enjoy and look forward to perusing your work. Thank you for allowing us into your world to visit. I look forward to the next piece that you allow us to read.

not sure how he could be in a bed with all 4 of those hot girls and keep his hands off his daughter ???

Another great story, very hot and enjoyable. Saved this reread later.

Great story series, loved every minute of it and good that he didn’t with Wendy which a lot of your readers may have been expecting

I couldn't finish the story. There was no character development. It seemed the only plot was to present as many different forms of sex as the author could squeeze in. I didn't rate it. It wouldn't be fair. I was fooled by the category placement and the further I read the more angry I became. A rating made in anger is "immoral."

Over a year ago I first read this & it’s still one of the best here. This time I’m going to save it in my best of file.

Bill S.