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Ravey19about 2 months agoExcellent. I can see things starting to move but I'm sure there will be roadblocks on the way. Looking forward to the next instalment.
ShotThroughTheHeartabout 2 months agoA very enjoyable read, indeed. The sometimes overwhelming number of protagonists is quite well countered by the naming of the chapters, which helps making the connections to the storylines a lot less strenuous. Good choice!
Five stars, of course! 👍
arrowglassabout 2 months agoReally interesting and fascinating story !
Thoroughly enjoying the story, the explanations, the suspense, the whole thing!!!!!!!!
mlrsdpicmabout 1 month agoReally enjoy the story but could have left out the engine stuff and had more story line to it.
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TheNovalist@TheNovalistUpdate - 2nd May Thank you all for your wonderful support for my little writing hobby. My schedule has cleared up quite nicely for the foreseeable future, so I should be able to pump a few out a good few chapters before the summer when I will be taking a little break for my v...
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