All Comments on 'All Is Fair Ch. 06'

Seriously, this could be a movie. Amazing writing. Please tell us more.

Please keep writing. I can't wait to see how Victor dies.

I get the feeling that they're going to have to kill Victor. Should be exciting and dangerous. It might be interesting to see if they can come up with a way to temporarily block the effects of the bite, or maybe Brooke's bite will change her scent enough to buy them some time to fix her problem. The possibilities are endless.

I completely agree with the comment about this being a good movie. Its interesting that you had me ROTFLMAO 2 days ago and weeping like a fool for Abe today. This is the best I have read on this site in a loooooooooong time.

As long as it doesn't degrade into a shitty tween saga, I'll watch it. Till then, the story is awesome!

Just today did I start to read this story and I am so glade I did. Everything about this has me hooked abd wanting more. I feel so bad for Brooks though. All he wants is to have her love him or really to have any feelings toward him. He envisioned finding his mate to be a whole lot better. I feel for Helena as well. I feel so bad for your experience. Her life has never been easy abd I don't forsee it getting better now that's she's found out half her Soul is taken. Finally her sister. I understand she was only 18 but how could she be so selfish! She knew there was a chance that she could never see her sister again and she still left her. If she would have brought her along bone of these things would be happening because she would have introduced Helena abd Brooks a long time ago and they would have been happy. anyway I love this story, please update soon!!!(:

Thank you so much for your feedback. Chapter 7 is ready to post and I am working on Chapter 8 right now. I hope you all still feel the same once you read some of the surprises headed your way!

This is one of the best stories I have read. 5 stars. I will definitely follow this tale.

it is great to have an author, who writes so well, and can manage to post chapters of length every few days, or less! but now i am afraid you will run out of story soon!

The pacing is perfect, and there is so much left to explore here. I love the build up and can't wait to see where you take us!

Do great but u got to give my boy Brooke A bone he is hiurting... Maybe the spirit of luna can help him out...... (Shrug) just a thought from a wolf fan..

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I'm pissed the hell off that her sister left her like that! I feel so bad for abe! Great story tho!

You made me cry. And miss a bath. I stink. A stinking cry-baby because of you. Are you ashamed of yourself for turning another human soul into something that resembles a communal toilet? No! Be proud! Communal toilets have shielded many a woolen pants from being rendered discardible. It has saved the face of legions of humans caught by the prowling and conniving interference of a contriving bladder. Oh doG, I need sleep. This surely is one of the top stories on here. Thank you so much.

You made me cry too. . .it's creditable. Thank you.

so far....?this is bloody brilliant. One of the best wolf type stories i have ever read. Thank you so much

I'm enjoying this story very much. It's an interesting take on werewolves and vampires. I tend to like stories with some lore to them; I find the world-building aspects of a story, if well-told, add to the immersion. The way you build suspense is nicely done. I've read other "wolf" stories that did a little better at character building but that would be nitpicking. I like your characters well enough to wish you wrote a little bit more about them. Actually, maybe a bit more on supporting characters but I get it; you're telling a tight little story and not a sprawling epic. 5 out of 5. PS. Sorry to see you haven't written anything since 2016. <3