All Comments on 'All Mine Ch. 01'

any chance of a sequel for this as I loved the chapter

Can't wait to read more! Awesome start!

Keep writing please :-)

Hope the rest is half as good, fascinating start

only one page, I've given you five stars so please, please don't tease with JUST ONE PAGE

Why do I have the feeling watchers name starts with m...

Absolutely loved this teaser, please write more!

So far I see a lot of promise to this series. 5's 😊😉

Somehow you seem young and yet knowing. I’ve read each part and enjoyed all. You have no need to change anything about your style. I thought in the first part it might be all about physical strength, which is dull, but it was about reluctance, desire, power, and surrender. You said it perfectly here, “A gentle touch, and genuine altruism to add fuel to the growing admiration. Teasing and bullying to add a frustration that made Melinda long to see the positives.“

Anne is steadily manipulating Millie into liking pain. It feels like she can seduce her weak sub into wanting anything.

More, please?