All Comments on 'All Mixed Up'

Do NOT keep us waiting for the rest of the story

Great short story with wonderfully realised characters. I look forward to more of your work. Cheers

Is it going to be continued? Seems unfinished to me, but good story nonetheless. Thanks.

~adgeon

Alcohol and sex are either a good combination or a bad combination. This story has a personal attachment for me. My wife was usually drunk but not always when she cheated on me. Unlike Walter I always forgave her.

...that you spoiled your story with the fundamentalist christian bullshit of sinners, hell, and needing forgiveness for being human.

I read the first page of this story and I just couldn’t get into it. A third of the story and not one thing that grabbed my attention and made me want to finish it. Sorry, but any kind of story, a book, a movie, whatever, has to give me something pretty early in to keep me interested. This one just didn’t. Maybe next time.

Not sure what the point of this story was... If it was part of a longer series then it makes sense, but as a stand alone story I have no interest in this little vignette. Well written overall just no need for it.