All Comments on 'All My Fault'

Sometimes I look at the comments of others before writing mine.

Not this time. This was a creative story that absolutely fits in LW... and that would have been enough for the follow and 5 stars. Very nicely done.

I can relate to his loss, as I'm dealing with an impending loss myself... but I have to reply to your epilog with my condolences on the loss of your daughter...

...we are not supposed to bury our children.

Excellent.

If my wife grabbed my cock, my hands would be around her beck squeezing until she let go.

Simply Brilliant

Vulcez, your time with us was far to short!!!

The Hoary Cleric

Not a member, but a reader for 15+ years

Loved it, a wonderful take on relationships and family pressures.

Crazy good story. 5 blazing stars.

Great story, thanks for sharing.

Fantastic story. Thank you.

We all have our favorite stories and authors This is truly exceptional .

it was a sweet story... and then you read the dedication. 🫂

One of the best ever here

i'm sitting here trying not to cry in front of my wife of 44 yrs and my granddaughter . we lost my daughter to breast cancer in january of 2015 ,she was just 30 yrs old .

A wonderful short story.

Oh I have probably read this ten times and it gets me every time. That or my office is dusty. One of the all time great stories on the site.

Great Story.. my condolences for your loss .

Loved the story. It brought tears to my eyes at the end. Thank you. I have a friend who kind of went on a reverse Plan she married 4semi wealthy and wealthy men then managed to reduce their wealth and the get a divorce when they were broke.

Once again it warms the cockles of my heart. Delightful. Hate to disagree with Btrying2, but in my book nothing more need be said.

Not sure how many times I have read this. Great heartwarming story. However he still needs to have serious discussion concerning her ability to plan his dismissal for at least the majority of the five years of their marriage. Good they got it together. Thanks for sharing. John

Different, a good quick read. thank you 5*

My eyes began to water. "It's all your fault, you know." That was not part of "The Plan".

Seriously though, the mother with this plan is terribly damaged, not only to implement such a cold and hurtful plan, but to also encourage her daughters to do the same thing. Of course they're not really any better for going along with it. It seems he got lucky and found the one that saw sense in the stupidity and heartlessness of it. But to think that shit like this could be a thing... scary stuff. Imagine one day your wife randomly up and leaving because she's following some cockamamie plan that she told you nothing about the whole time you were together. Nightmare fuel for me really.

Damn you it's all your fault for making my eyes start to sweat

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great story

This story is pure genius. The author starts the story by making us hate this loathsome woman, but by the end we're all weeping because we love her. Nice job.

I'm truly and sincerely sorry about your daughter

This was such a strange story and yet it still struck me hard emotionally. The ending was sweet but that really got the tears pouring. 5⭐️+. Thank you for sharing this story and I am very sorry about you losing your daughter.

i started crying at the end when the author said he lost his daughter to cancer . i also lost my daughter to breast cancer in january 2015 she had just turned 30 in sept .

Wow, just wow, 5 stars. This story has it all. Thank you for taking the time to share this powerful story, I was enraged at the beginning of this story as Katey started talking about "the Plan" and in the end them staying together and living a loving life together and her saying on her death bed that "she had a wonderful life" I could almost see the love that they had for each other, meh, maybe I'm just a softy, but this story touched me, thank you for that.

Best wishes to you and yours.

Great story. D

Just so much emotion packed into this one page story. My wife of 52 years beat breast cancer, but I'm sure it contributed to her failing health in later life, that and the unknown problems with childhood polio that later revealed itself in adulthood. Happy that Katey came to her senses before harm was done to the marriage. Five stars.

Sorry to hear of your loss. Great story

If The Bear can give it ten stars I wish to the same.

The big 'C' is the most evil thing on earth. Great story, sad ending, sadder still to learn of your daughter

Lost My wife of 35 years to cancer in August of 2011. The real sad part is there will never be a cure, not from this Country (US) anyway. Too much money for the drug companies to loose. Some treatments in Mexico show promise. Great story, Hit Home.

Like others have said, this is the best story ever published in "Loving Wives', and in Literotica. Again, 10 stars, because I can't count, and it's worth it. This is at least the sixth time I've read it as I go back to it when I'm feeling blue. My wife of 53 years is suffering from the blues and depression from a stroke years ago. I don't want to think of the future, but the past was fan-fucking-tastic. 5 children, 10 grandkids, and more love than this Viet Vet deserves. God bless you, son. Welcome home and I'm sure your daughter is smiling down at you. Sorry you aren't writing any more. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

I’m sorry your daughter died.

Aw c'mON! You forgot one imp thing in the jump in time ... you forgot to account für where Cheryl and Kyle got off in the converging stories of their lives...

whether Katey and hubby (Vulcez?) helped Cheryl's reunion attempts... and did it result in unintended consequences such as sb involved dying?

Wishing you long life and fond memories of Tracy.

I'm sorry to hear about your daughter .The story made me mad and cry , it was wonderful

I love it

Thank you for sharing your talent and your bravery. Your dedication is so moving and eloquent. I can't imagine what you and your family have gone through. Again thank you. BardnotBard.

Great story but could have done without the jumping to her dying. LM

wonderful story and heartwrenching dedication. I can't imagine what you went through.

Your dedication at the end of you story has me bawling like a baby. I can’t imagine the heart break and sorrow of losing a child. I hope I never find out.

Thank you for a wonderful heart felt story of how true love matters the most!

Lamento mucho lo que sufrió tú hija

Mis condolencias

The dedication is too sad, so very sorry for your loss.

It amazes me how a few people can write this well, and how there can be so many people out there who just write complete trash and think they're doing something like this. I'd like to see a writers like this form another website that can be done without the r and x-rated material, that could be shared with young adults in high school kids well so they learn these lessons early. Leaving out the explicit parts would make the value of this go up so much for many people, and for our society. Any leaders out there willing to start something uplifting and beneficial to our world?

Awesome story. Thanks

Cute y cruel

6 stars

Very sorry to hear about your daughter. The story is a true tribute to true love.

A wonderful story, deserving of way more that five stars, although five stars say that"I love it.". Powerful.

JPB

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Sorry for your loss.

Wish you were still writing!

5

Lovely Story.

My daughter died of cancer in May of 2011. She was only 49. I shared your pain and experience at the same time.

Merlin

Love this one x

Wow. Just… wow. This guy can write.

Sad, but sweet.

Excellent slice of a wonderful life.

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Beautiful story.

Very nice. Well ended unlike so many stories on Literotica

Excellent! 5 stars, sorry for your loss. DD

Great story. Sorry for the loss of your daughter.

I have read and reread this story. It really is one of the best that I have read. It begs a second story where her mom gets her just deserts, but the basic story is flawless in my eyes. Well done

5 stars. And so, so sorry about your Tracy...

5 stars

Crazy good story.

Superb.

O.K., it is without a doubt the best all-time story on Literotica. Also the Bear's favorite. (So I'm a softy. Sue me!) 10 stars because it is worth it. They call this "Loving Wives" for a reason. As always, the Bear approves. Thanks for writing it, again. I needed a pick-me-up due to the Christmas blahhs.

The BEAR

An amazing story. Simple but creative.

So, she lies to him for however long they dated and for five years of marriage. Then, she grabs his sex organ to keep him under control while she tells him the story. Short of being a total pussy, why would he ever stay with her?

This is a simple story, and yet there is something quite powerful about it. Very well done.

Good story made me think about life and love

Such a beautiful story, lots of thought and love put into this.

One of the best stories of all time! Amazing writing!

A true Loving Wife

Wow! Where did this extremely gifted writer go. I've just read three of his works and I'm definitely going to read the rest. Thank you for your great tales.

I've read this a few times and have written a positive review, with definite notes of sadness for the author, I have had 2 back to back siblings pass from the C (18 months apart). So for this I am empathetic to his suffering. That being said , the one thing I cannot get past is the fact the husband did not force her to sign a post-nup. There were years and years of wayyyyyyy to much brainwashing of her just to let it all go and pray she doesn't relapse into that mind set. He needed to protect himself. Yes the ending proved it ultimately wasn't necessary but at the time...... just saying

One of the best stories on this site ...

Excellent story. I've been married 48 years and am living proof it can be done

A stunning story.

Thank you for the emotions this story brought out.

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Very Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Fantastic, Great, I love the entire story. Thank you

You did you daughter proud!

Damn! I hate you. I hate authors that have the ability to make me cry. I cried at the end, while smiling at the same time. You are amazing. Thank you! I really don't hate YOU, I just hate that you have the ability to evoke emotion in me.

Wonderful. Fantastic author!

You make my heart ache.

It feels strange to say it...but thank you.

Its been awhile since i first read this, but i enjoyed it then and i enjoyed it again. Better than weary cuk stories

Beautiful story and I'm so sorry for your loss .

Outstanding!!!

This a great story. All the lame little cuck authors should read this and rethink their direction.

No one should have to bury their child. I am so so very sorry.

There are very few stories on literotica that I can genuinely give a 5star rating to. I think it's been about 5-7 stories that managed to reach that threshold before I read this one. I'm glad I could give this story 5 as well.

A real happy ending...great read thanks

Ok, so I'm a sucker for a tearjerker. 5 stars.

Thanks for a good story. Is it just me or would it take some time to get over the fact that I had married a gold digger and into a family that were so conniving as to look at marriage as to only what they could get out of it. I'm glad it worked out for him but he was lucky. What other horrible attributes did she take from her mother that would come into play in this marriage and what nasty habits would she pass on to her children and grandchildren. I would have to keep my eye on her for a long time after the talk.

While the story was a good one, seriously everyone is so happy to wet themselves over this, they intentionally ignore that almost every spouse would have some lingering questions and doubts.....as in sleeping in the spare room for a couple days at least.

So yes, it is a shiny happy story with the reality totally removed.

I'd like to correct my thoughts on the timing. Yes, we can think of this conversation taking place in 2012, when the story was written, so the mother's divorces would have been well before no fault and wives making out like bandits in a divorce (assuming that's true irl and not just LW), but the conversation could be taking place at some time in the future, just as the deathbed scene does, putting her mother's early marriages into a more recent time.

Great little vignette. Five stars and favorited.

Just re-read it again. Still the best story on Loving Wives, possibly on Literotica. 10 stars, as always. The Bear always approves this one.

The BEAR