All Comments on 'All That Blooms in Spring Ch. 01'

LOL! You posted them ALL on the same day and time and chapter one magically shows up by itself? I don't remember the original title, but this seems like EXACTLY the same story you already posted. He discovers his wife's perfidity, goes for a walk, falls down a canyon (pretty dumb), Dr Ann saves him, he goes thru all kinds of deceptions, the FBI guy mysteriously tells him the truth, he divorces his wife and marries Ann. Done and done. Kind of a waste to post it again.

Good beginning!

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No clue what u r doing here?? I hope u know urself…?

This seems to be a repost....I've read this already.

Where's the difference compared to the first version?

Where are the other chapters? You posted this one earlier.

Wtf this is an old one

Thank you for reposting! I enjoyed pt. 01 the first time around and was sad when the story was pulled and worried that it wouldn't be reposted.

Again this story ? Realy ?

At least Chapter 1 got posted first. Again! The real trick will be to see if Chapter 2 ( if it really actually exists) gets posted next?

So why didn't you just submit it as one story then ?????

Same story I read about one or two weeks ago

Does this have a different ending than the story I read a few weeks ago? Something is not right here

How did the same story get posted again?

What kind of stupid shit is this? Walking in the woods at night? Why not just get his shit together and leave? He's already determined that there's no going back to Jackie so why not cut to the chase of separation from her?

Cooking, can you believe the comments - these LWM's never read your NEW beginning or Bio - typical LWM's (LW genre Masturbator)....

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However, your opening statement did not state what your posting periodicity will be to insure L posts them in proper sequence? One a week or every 2-3 days?

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Very interesting and the last sentence opens up some wild possibilities, especial since you did not state what age and how sexy the Doc is....

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4.5****, Hooyah, Salutes....

something about the chapters being posted out of order and not being able to correct it. Author had the OP removed and seems to be trying to add the 2nd chapter in order.

I believe CWG is reposting the story so the parts are put out in order. Unfortunately, part two got hung up and three came out leaving a big gap in the story. By reposting, hopefully the post dates are in same order as the chapter number.

He made mention of this in his Lit bio.

The "I have low reading comprehension" crowd shows up en masse. I suggest you reread the bold part at the front end of the story. It states that: (1.) the series was posted out of order by Literotica, with the middle omitted. With a mass of stuff to wade through, accidents do happen; (2) OP removed the entire series, as the effect was rather squandered; (3.) After many people messaged him and asked for the whole to be reposted, OP has thus resubmitted it.

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Got it?

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As always, CWG delivers!! 5 stars!

The John Yossarian

Already rated the original so I'll leave this one unrated and part for the next part. Good luck!

I was one of those who messaged you for the missing chapter. Don’t worry about these morons and their comments. They obviously only skimmed your story the first time around anyway. Now, if the missing chapter doesn’t show up in the next day or two, I’ll be complaining too!! Good story.

Firstly…appreciate that you are reposting this, and that this time we will get Chapter 2 before 3 &4 😎

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On this second read of Chapter 1, it appeared to be clear per up a bit…seemed to flow a bit better. Or maybe upon second read I just internalized it better?

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In any event, there were 2 small plot points that bugged me: first, that our hero would leave his obviously drug/alcohol impaired wife alone while she appeared to be insistent on the fuckfest. Why would he do that? Trusted the potential playmates with her?

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The 2nd plot point is one several others noted: why the heck did he wander off into the woods alone and at dark? Of course the answer is that your story needed for him to have a problem and be found by Dr Ann. But maybe it would have been more logical for him to drive away in his car, and perhaps have a tire blowout and wreck…where Ann still finds him?

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In any event…thanks again and look forward to Chap 2. When it was first posted, Chapt 3 didn’t make much sense…so I never tried to finish it 🤗

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4 ****

Confusing.

First you start off the the cliched idiotic wife who thinks she can tell her husband how he can react, and then you have him wander off in the dark, have a cerebral edema but still have perfect memory of what happened? Really?

I for one am delighted you decided to repost your story now instead of later on in the spring. This a great start to what I think might be a great series. And yes, some of the commenters are quite stupid. And please dont let some stupid commenters disillusion you to continue here. Looking forward to more chapters. 5stars

I would NEVER pay to read your garbage! You are one of the worst writers on this site.

Left out chapter 2 so u could buy it off his pay sites. That's just fdup

Not as good as l thought it would be. Just too far fetched, just too “Misery” for my liking

Scores 3/5 for the effort.

Absolutely boring beyond belief.

lol I totally would have wandered off alone in the woods at night. I totally get it. Every one of his friends and his wife stabbed him in the back and he wanted to get the hell out of there. And I believe he had been drinking and obviously couldn't drive. No it's not smart but he couldn't be around those people

A good story following like some others, a little like The Bridge. Lead on and 5 stars

Very entertaining, but the arrival of the Dr and her ability to conduct brain surgery & run IV’s in a remote wood cabin kinda fucks up the credibility

It is a great read and I appreciate you sharing with us.

Just no. The reasons for the whole “get him to believe Ann never happened” were incoherent. The motivation for Jackie and friends to perpetrate the fantasy was nonexistent. The timeframe over which the playacting happened was too long.

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While it was a relief that he and Ann got together and seemingly had a good life….all of the BS to get there just didn’t compute.

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3 ***

Is there a reason why he didn't just get in his car and drive home?

Sorry, but 1 star is the best I can do.

Interesting story so far. I’ll try another chapter.

This actually started off quite well. But.

started well, magical beautiful doctor was a big drop in quality.

The "surprise" device is absurd. There are 6 people involved: 5 know and one doesn't. It's not his birthday, there is no reason for a surprise, therefore it is not a surprise: it's a trap. Didn't even make it half way through the first page. When wifey snarls the jig is up. The rest only works if the mc tells the reader that he's going to go along with it just to see where it goes. Which he does not do.

Liked this Femdom agitprop until it took a sharp left into a dreamscape. BTW he would’ve taken the car!

I was all in until the hike into the wilderness. Seems silly. Well written enough that I will continue. I am not confident.