All Comments on 'All That Glitters Ch. 13'

Keep it coming, great story, excellently written. 10* if possible

One suggestion, though. Put the abbreviations list at the end of each chapter, with maybe a reference to that fact at the beginning.

I agree completely with the previous comments from Dogman. This is a great, well written story.

I love this story. I look for it every morning to enjoy with my coffee.

Added to my favorites, thanks again for sharing your talent with us.

Still Lovin' this series, the Action, drama, and adventure are great! Only wish the chapters were longer. But Five Stars once again. Cliff hanger, can't wait for more.

What a great yarn! Love the way you have built up this universe and developed your characters. There is so much more than just a sci-fi story here, with a decent amount of intrigue involved. Hell, I don't even mind the crossover between military and civilian command, and it's nice to read a story that doesn't have people screwing each other just for the of gratuitous sex. Apart from a few silly grammatical and spelling errors, its all good, EXCEPT, and please forgive me here, but you've made this error once too many times, the correct use is 'Courts-Martial not Court-Martials, and it's Aides-de-Camp, not Aide-de-camps. Apart from those minor things that really jagged my senses, I'm thoroughly enjoying your yarn. I know it'll end, and I will be sorry to read the last paragraph. Guess I'll have to look at anything else you've written, and see how it compares. Cheers and good luck, Frosty.

Holly crap this is a brilliant story LOVE IT.

The ship builder is getting credit for the generator upgrades. But shouldn't royalties go to Clark and associates as they allowed the dr to prefect the generators. So if the builder starts a space line done they get a say?, very much enjoying the story