All Comments on 'All That Glitters Ch. 14'

That was not only a great chapter but it also moves the story along by showing everything else that is happening in conjunction with the last chapter. Great job and can't wait for the next part!

Just finished reading chapter 13, and found chapter 14 waiting, oh Happy Days. Five Stars once again. Now to await 15, and more. Thank you for this wonderful escape from our current covid19 reality.

The people, circumstances, setting, everything about it is so believable! I am waiting with "bated breath" as the saying goes for whatever you come up with next!!!!!

A few chapters into this story, I had been somewhat upset with the gratuitous bravery, heroism and general perfectness of the major characters and how character development seems to be measureable in terms of metal to cloth ratio in their dress uniforms. Since then, however, the story has continously shifted into true space opera territory, making sufficient room for a few larger-than-life heroes. Combined with a straight forward but cleverly presented political thriller story, this story makes for a supremely enjoyable read and will be at the top of my check-for-new-chapters list of bookmarks.

Why does the author bog down the first page of each chapter with all those names? It gets in the way of a good story. They should have been on the first page of the first chapter, and left there.

The story is great. Love it.

I would love it more if grammar was correct for the use of amount and number and I don't know why there this odd use of the word "vice".

A spider was religious . A woman boasted that she could spin better than palas Athena the Greek goddess of woman's craft , defensive war and wisdom . So she turned her into the first spider