by bigtddybr
In 58 days will mark 2 years of this monumental story, it's been an entertaining ride and I will be looking forward for more great things to happen. 5 stars
This series was starting to stagnate a bit but these last two chapters have really reversed it! Keep up the great work!
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Best part of the chapter was about Aurelia and how she took over and is driving the government.
Yet another great chapter of a great tale. Five stars all the way. Keep it coming.
Great. I check regularly and am excited to see a new chapter posted. EPIC
Damn a whole lot of shit going down at the Landstradt. And I have a feeling there is still more to come. Once again , thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. 5 stars
Heh. Aurelia is definitely not someone you want to cross. She just seized control of her house, after gutting it, and still remains perhaps the most powerful person on the planet. I suspect she's going to be a powerful voice in the upcoming discussions with the Union, along with the head of House Hadren, who secretly helped the Union.
Looking forward to the next chapter. And Happy Holidays!
Another awesome addition to this saga, I wish you a merry christmas, and hope for your brain too cook up the next chapter post haste, as we are all at the edge of our seats, i also hope for a speedy rescue of Raymond Clark, so he can get back to spending some of his trillions of credits, perhaps buying a planet, creating his own fleet, allying with the union ofcourse, but able to act more independently than now. Cheers from Denmark.
This yarn just keeps "upping the ante" on what makes a story really great! The involvement of the Toolend in human affairs to the betterment of all, the evolving intrigue of the Landstradt, the machinations of getting something done in government, the Pod-Drran and a use for their Man-jays...everything your fertile imagination keeps turning out make this a FAVORITE story!!!! NOW...I just have to read this chapter again!!!! SO WELL DONE!!!
What pleases me the most is that things can go wrong and the intrigue is captivating.
Aurelia has plans, that much is obvious. I think she will be a force to be reckoned with, especially when it comes to the rest of the slaves..
Excellent work!
I have only one problem with all this.
...I now have to WAIT for the next chapter, damnit!
Go easy on the italics at the beginning of each story. You’re a good storyteller, let the story tell itself.
This was a very good chapter. I enjoyed the intrigue and surprises that went on. I really enjoyed the toolend people able to help the freed union citizens with their trama. With what went on in the Landstradt. I looked like Aurelia has set up and instigated everything to get back at the House Adenomere for trying to kill her just for her dowry. now with the hole upset of the lanstradt and the changing of the dynamics within, what will come next. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Please continue this series in the form and spirit that you have been. I just got done binge reading the entire series over the course of 36 hours. Had a blast. I look forward to your furthering the plot and the characters in whatever manner seems fitting. Trust yourself, obviously what you’re doing works extremely well.
I love this incredible sci first series. I was introduced to another series in the mid 70's. It was titled Perry Rhodan. This was a German series that only translated about 120 paperbacks to English sadly. Last I heard they were up over 2000. Please keep them coming. You have created an fantastic series. DC
Any updates on when you will publish the next chapter? Your previous bio post from 1/11 made it sound like a weeks time but it has almost been 2 weeks and you have not updated your bio so I don't think you have submitted Ch. 41 yet.
the Profit stood behind those being judged -> the Prophet stood behind those being judged
Excellent Landstradt scene.
I did rather enjoy Aurelia's master strokes of deception and strategy, well thought out and well written.