by Bob Waters
This is a great story, it has a great build up. Want to see more of this series, eh?
Very Sexy story, well written. You alluded to a further development with Gloria, in "La Bella Italiana" and touched on it again at the end of this story, did you write it?
I hope you can continue writing stories with Jill as your main character. You have developed her persona nicely. Very talented, thank you.
I liked the idea of this story, but I have to say, this shouldn't be under the "lesbian" category, because this involves sex with two girls, and a guy. It should be more under "Loving Wives" or something else.