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by ARavenInTheNight

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 9 years ago
A good start

Perhaps he could get the powers to reproduce, and make his daughter pregnant.

Thanks for the read

ARavenInTheNightARavenInTheNightalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Possible second chapter

If there's enough interest I will write chapter 2. Hopefully more people comment and let me know.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good Story

I usually like to read long stories for the purpose of reading stories with twists. But I have to say that your short story seems like can go places if you expand on it. Other than that great story and hope for a chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great Story

Chapter 2 please

ARavenInTheNightARavenInTheNightalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 Very Soon

Chapter 2 should be uploaded by about 6:06EDT tomorrow. But it could be early or ecen delayed.

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Ironically last updated saying I was returning to work on stories five days before starting a job with long hours. If you stumble on this, I'm working primarily on fantasy stories. There's currently no interest from any of you in my continuing the series' I have submitted befo...