All Comments on 'All The Pretty Girls Ch. 05'

good ending keep it up and looking for the next story also wondering why i jennifer was not completed 5 stars to all your stories

Don't understand your I Jennifer comment. It is indeed complete; in fact Chapter 4 is titled "The End".

It was great -- lovely as always. Only one minor correction:

"Mitch pulled down her skirt to give her some decorum and then looked for the keys to her handcuffs."

Mitch had just had his head blown off so I was assuming you meant Steve instead.

Fabulous story again. I love this series and hope we meet them all again

Picky... well spotted. I'll sack my editor! 💋💋💋 Michele

As always a great little whodunnit!! Sexy scenes linked by an intriguing plot. Thanks Michelle

I like how you try to combine erotica with a tangible story line that makes for good reading. Looking forward to your next story.

Love your stories Michele. Whilst I have thing for pantyhose and that's always a feature, your characters feel real, the plots are always engaging and they are set in the real world for transpersons with all it's joys and challenges.

excellent

If you look in the dictionary under tour de force, there is a picture o Michele !

Bloody amazing again.

About time you got ms. Bishop in a proper relationship

Amazing story! I‘m hooked. Will explore your other stories auswell.

That ending was indeed a thriller, Michele, my sweet girl. Loved 😍 it all and, as you know by now, enjoyed my masturbation times when you gave me erotic, mental sex pictures with your wonderful words. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! It's always good to see the bad guy terminated. Now I'm on to another story in your vast list of options. You really tickle my interests with your variety of categories, Michele. It's like I 👍 know that I'll love ❤️ each story, because you are It's author.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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I love the Penelope stories. Thanks for sharing your gift.

Once again you proven you are the best writer on Literotica please keep up the good work

Mitch got his brains blew out, then you say, Mitch pulled Penelope's skirt down.