All Comments on 'All The Things You Are'

by SilverMuse

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ericthebardericthebardabout 4 years ago
Top Work!

You never fail to impress. Excellent work.

tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 4 years ago
Well done.

Tight narrative, quick and to the point. No extraneous information, just the bare (!) facts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Well done

I do enjoy reading a women's writing. It is somehow much more intimate than a man's thoughts. I'll be reading your stories to find out what else is lurking in you mind.

ManosHandsManosHandsabout 4 years ago
One of the best!

I do so enjoy your writing.

I was imagining that the story would just end as it started, with her in total control. But you built it up so much that it had to go where you wrote it. I saved this as one of my favorites, so, when needed, I can go back to it.

Thanks!

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterabout 4 years ago
So good!

Oh my god that was hot! Thanks for a great cum.

LJJLLJJLabout 4 years ago

Love this, so hot and felt really real - brilliant writing with the characters, much better than a lot of the shit on this website

SilverMuseSilverMuseabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I really appreciate all your sweet comments. It was so much fun to play with control in this story -- to let Alana run the show, then choose to surrender. I did think about letting her stay in charge through the end, but the characters insisted otherwise. Thanks for reading~ xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I just wanted to drop by to let you know how excited I am knowing you’re posting again! I can not count how many times I have read your entries. No matter how many times I read them, they always pull me in. Thank you for what you do and I can’t wait to read what else you publish!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Favorite Erotic Author

HOT. I’m hooked on your writing, Miranda. Read the Boys Next Door out loud to my wife earlier this year and I thought she was going to levitate off of the bed, she was so aroused. It was such an erotic experience going on that journey together. Always get excited when I see some new work from you. Thanks!

Ava_T_ArgentAva_T_Argentalmost 4 years ago
The Best of Crave

Wow, definitely the hottest story of the collection!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 3 years ago
Exquisite

Just...exquisite.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love it

In my fantasy they were rugby players, but this so worked for me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Holy.

FUCK.

Well, this WASN'T my fantasy. That's a scary power you've got there, to implant a fetish with two pages of text.

Please don't stop...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Oh no...she going to fall for him...that's what she in for

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