All Comments on 'All the World's a Stage'

Freaking amazing! Shop this to Hallmark...

Thank you very much.

When can we expect chapter 2? ;)

With the exception of a single mistyped letter (say instead of saw), a perfect and heart warming story!

Loved it. Thank you.

You've really been consistently hitting it out of the park lately, but imho this time the ball is in orbit.

Great story..... I'm a reader so it always feels like there should be more.....but maybe that's what a good writer does!!!! I'll just waited for chapters 2 3 4 or more....

Awesome story! I suspect there's a lot of the author in the protagonist. Well done, indeed!

A couple of tiny typos but five stars, anyway. (I’m stingy with stars, too.)

For this good story. If there's more to tell of Tricia and Mathew I can hardly wait.

A Treat

A great story - many thanks.

Loved every bit of that story. Laughed out loud at times because of the word play. I certainly hope you can envision part 2~?

I must say that this is one of the best of Lit that I've read in some time! Thank you for sharing this with us! I cannot wait for more of this story!

You are one of my favorite authors here but this story was just too long. I gave up at page 4. I liked the ending I skipped to and I hope I like your next one better.

I really liked the way the story developed. Enough tension without belaboring the plot. Kudos

i didn't think we needed the son's side plot. you are going to make a second Chapter? Like a third chapter to the under cover mother, and His last Summer. Pretty Please with sugar on top!

Loved all the characters. Well written. Keep up the great work. Frankie

Outstanding! Again!

This was really good, full of personal drama and tension, hot and steamy throughout. The only suggestion I have is to get an editor, or proof a little better. There were several simple mistakes that while didn't derail the story, definitely made me stumble as I read. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to more from this talented author.

5*

Ryan's dialogue wasn't really age-appropriate. He talked like someone much older, and his character felt a bit too mature for even a mature high school senior. I think he might work better as a sibling or close friend of the main character.

Otherwise, really good and well written. A unique take on a classic idea.

Hatts off to you.

wow! Man great Writing ..

badly Want chapter 2 now .

Best of luck. Stay safe in this lockdown period

I am indeed envious of how well written your stories are...

Another excellent effort. Two minor comments, if I may.

1. As a 32 year veteran teacher, I can't disagree more than I do with Ancientcipher. I experienced many students like Ryan, far more mature for his/her age, as exemplified by both his character and dialolgue. Many developed those qualities by necessity, often created by having to fend for themselves due to similar family situations; and

2. the simple phrase "not the sharpest pencil in the box" was a needless, demeaning comment about Jenny, particularly since it was never illustrated by either word or deed.

Well written!! Part 2 please?

One of the best stories I've read!

I loved the beautiful bond Ryan and Matthew share!

I love how sexy and sweet Is Matthew and the passion he share with Tricia

Again, amazing work

Can't wait to read mlre of your stories!!

Well Done!!!!!!

I loved your work. Could not stop reading until it was done.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!!!!

What a good one this is, long but full of great descriptions, characters and sex.

Having enjoyed a lot of the authors over the years, I have been a little frustrated that my skills would be so low in comparison - but along comes darkoverlord6 who then produces probably the best piece I have read, so full of content, describing situations that we could all relate in part at least..... absolutely brilliant, well done.....

Definitely needs more. :).

Dear Author, Truly enjoyed your sweet little love story. Another example of a joining of two characters based

upon a mutual need for love. Really enjoyed your plot and characters and believable story concept. Gave it a 5 star rating but wish I could award it more. Thank you, jntiques.john

Decent story,but I think it needs more.

Definitely needs more , like everyone sai.

Talented writers like you make me smile. Thank you.

Please sir.....could we have some more?

I enjoyed this story and gave it 5 stars. It was great to see in the story that Ryan had no problems with Trisha and Matthew dating and having a sexual relationship with each other. The sad parents of Trisha could not care less so their permission is unnecessary. I am so glad Trish is done with that on again off again relationship with her ex-boyfriend. The similarities of his abuse that the abuse Matthew suffered from his ex-wife is interesting. I really enjoyed this story.

I appreciated your take on the struggles involved in a relationship that has a large age separation. You have become one of favorite authors.

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Very Sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Please, chapter 2

Thank you, again, great story!! 2nd chapter?

I have read this story through twice now. It is worth a third read, sometime in the future.

This was an awesome love story. I loved it and will definitely read again later!!!!!!