All Comments on 'All the Young Girls Love Laura Pt. 04'

by Lisa Summers

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Love it

Can’t wait for chapter 5. I absolutely love this series

paulyepspaulyepsalmost 4 years ago

Ugh .. please don’t ruin it ... this chapter was just a distraction ... not much about Laura & Melissa .. who initiated contact ? What was discussed ? You left out a lot ... ugh ... rings ? How did that happen ? I can’t wait for the next chapter ...

AcetabulumAcetabulumalmost 4 years ago
Beautiful and complex

What a well written piece. Thank you for sharing this.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 4 years ago

Not bad, I kind of skimmed over about a page worth so I don't know what happened with the nun's but I am sure it was was good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Like the addition of the nuns especially Teresa who seems clairvoyant and able to read minds. Thought the transition from her bed to hospitable bed was just weird and could have been handled better. I would like to hear how the ending with Teresa went.

Looking forward to next chapter.

J

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 4 years ago
Yes..

You are back and with a vengeance. How refreshing to see one of my favorites back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Excellent as usual. Looking forward to next installment.

SB

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting ending

But more importantly Laura clearly fucked an angel.

Anonymous
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