All Comments on 'All the Young Girls Love Laura Pt. 05'

highly erotic and skillfully written. porn of the very best kind.

This can’t be the end of this story ? Please tell me there’s more to come .. well written by the way.. you really are a truly gifted writer !! ❤️❤️

I absolutely love this story. But will there be a chapter 6? You said that this is the denouement to Laura’s story but it doesn’t see like it. What about the private investigator? Or the meeting with their mothers? I’d also like to see Laura and Melissa’s story continue till their eventual marriage

Cannot wait to see how you are going to finish this.

Agreed with the comments. Please give us at least one more chapter to wrap the loose ends! Great story!

Superb! What a heady rollercoaster of a story! And told with great skill, variety and sensitivity. Didn't like the butt/poop stuff, but that's just me.

Absolutely the best chapter yet. When Melissa showed up I was so happy. Please another chapter to wrap this up

I concur with anonymous 11 months ! I've read many of your posts plus a variety of your books from Amazon ! I was totally aghast to see how you ended chapter #5 !!!

The Indian computer expert ….. she will surely study video tapes and find the ID of the vehicle involved in the crash??

I agree with the other comments here - there seems so much left unresolved here. It's a little confusing too - not sure how we got from the convent with Sister Theresa to Laura suddenly regaining consciousness in hospital. Some tying up of loose ends would be appreciated here :)

I feel empty. Did the sitcom get canceled without an conclusion? Who hit them? Was it Jason? An ex client? Are you done with it?

The idea of this story line was good and the presentation was fine but it lacked a credible rhythm. It jumped from one sexual encounter to the next with little tying it together or giving any variation in context. Almost a boring wham bam thank you mam, as i would expect from a male writer with little imagination. Do not mention the ending which was very poorly handled with no leads to continue the story line. Just as if the author ran out of ideas. sorry

I really enjoyed the whole excellent series. Thank you for your 5 part story. Alll 5's