All Comments on 'All Things Come... Vol. 2 Ch. 06'

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GrayMoodGrayMoodalmost 18 years ago
I like the direction the story is going

I was worried in the last chapter when you mentioned that there were changes coming. I like the direction the story seems to be going. Uli is my favorite of the women. Luke is more human now. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thank you!

I enjoyed part 1 very much, and was enjoying part 2, but...yes, it was starting to be formulaic. Plot then hot sex then plot works fine with me, what I really needed was to know that Luke wouldn't find a new harem in city after city after city, who all find, surprisingly, that they're not jealous of one another.... I have LOVED the way you've changed the story, both with "non-Luke" scenes, and especially with the development between Luke and Uli. Little hints of a special relationship between them were there earlier, but I really was surprised and pleased that you are developing the story this way. The conversations between those two in the Ardennes were beautiful.

I can't wait to read the rest!

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