by dweaver999
Very hot storyline!! Don't leave us hanging too long. What an interesting concept for the sex hormone, sure hope she lives.
Great story, I would like to read part 2 to see what happens.
You have a great plot going here and I can't wait to read the next installment!
Cool idea. They should have a character like Cynthia on NBC's Heroes, hehe.
top marks on a great effort....usually the genre gets overworked with a bunch of bullshit...thanks for using mind control the way it should be used..
Best story I've read in a long time. Looking forward to the reading the next chapter, hopefully soon.
You write wonderful stories.Not only do the have a plot and nice characture developement they have little droplets of humor, love it!
Great Story. Can't wait to continue. Very hot, and great plot.