All Comments on 'Allegra & Steve Ch. 01'

I can't wait for your next installment.

I loved your story. Very erotic and well written. You have a knack for capturing the little details that make a good story really outstanding. There is an element of playfulness that makes the encounter between mom and son so very enjoyable. And a writer of erotic stories who quotes T.S. Eliot!! I am impressed. Can't wait for the next instalment.

Excellent !

Please continue the story.

Just a quick little note to ask you to not waste any time writing the next chapter to this great story.

Great start - keep it coming

..this hot mom sees what she wants and goes for it!!!!

Please continue this story line you've laid a wonderful foundation for a long series and it's well written.

Great start will look for your next chapter.

If the next chapters are as hot as this one, there will be some computers on fire soon!

hard and stroking to this

Made me spray. Thank you!

It's been a long while since I've read a story this well written with a very fluent story line. Great work---Like I said, BAM!

Wow. What a great start. You write very well. Can't wait for the next chapter.

sure hope in the future chapters she gets knocked up by her own son

You got me hard as a rock with this tale so if I've got to keep it up YOU damn well better keep it up too!!

Looking forward to chapter two.

Hi, I just loved your story. Please write chapter two soon. Try to write about a threesome with the son girlfriend. Let mom be a teacher in anal sex.

This is a really great begginning with good characters, the son seems a little naive, but seeing characters progess is a good thing. I'll be looking for the second chapter.

really hot it got me going why you stopped writting more chapters this story is good

Enjoyed reading it nothing better than love between Mother and Son.

You are an excellent writer. I really enjoyed reading this and I hope there is a lot more to cum.

I loved it.

Mommy? Give me a break, no young man calls their mother, mommy. Hell I stopped calling mine that when I was 12.

Otherwise I still enjoyed this story.

top quality

A great story with a lot of good erotic sex. The author's writing is very descriptive and creates a good visual for the reader.

Thanks for the great story

GUESS I READ TO SLOW , AS IT SEEMS TO ME THERE WAS A PLACE WHERE I SORTA STUMBLED (just once)ON ONE SIMPLE WORD('ME") EWE SHOULD FIND IT ON THE 1st. PAGE & EITHER THE 7th, ORE 8th. CHAPTER..OTHER THAN THAT , VERY GOOD JOB OF WRITING & A VERY INTERESTING READ... THANK YOU FOR SHARING...

I really enjoyed it , words flow really well and it just makes you want to slow down as for it not to end to soon, really hope it goes on, love to see what these two get in to :), thanks , nathan in ga.

NO idea your age but you write like a 2 year old, grammer is atrocious, and wtf is with writers and teenagers calling they`rre mother mommy

If i ever did call my mother mommy i quit long before i was 4 years old

made me hot....just continue, and don't listen to negative comments.

if you want to worry about grammer go to another site.

I dont like the nonny thing but not judging because we've all said or done stupid things when hormones take over

good story,looking forward to chapter 2

A very hot story. I do think" mommy" was used to excess, but that would be my only complaint.

I am looking forward to the other chapters.

Thanks Don

Nice start to story but Steve talks like he is 10 years old. Kino

Excellent start but wished the mother has used better language. As for the mother/son relationship, who better to teach a young, inexperienced adult male about sex and pleasing a woman than his mother. She always loves him unconditional. She will be non-judgemental. She will proovide the instructions in a straight forward, gentle manner. Her corrections will be made with love. For the son, he knows his mother loves him unconditionally. To be able to learn the difference between a girl and a woman, sexujally, emotionally, and psychologically, is priceless. As the story progresses, I hope the son developes a spine and adult language skills.