All Comments on 'Allen & Ashlyn: New Years Eve'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
confused

Its hard to read with so many people's thoughts on same page. It would be better from 1 persons viewpoint

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lotta Noiise

Everyone in this story seems to moan a lot,though normally only some women do. Also that dad has more sexual energy it seems, than most teenagers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You are including too many people.

Don't do that. It takes away from the principle relationship. The daddy and daughter one. Made me sad.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sabout 5 years ago
Why?

What a fucking waste of a story. The daughter loses her virginity to her dad then goes and fucks her friends dad? Maybe brother too but stopped reading after that. What a fucking whore and you diminished the daughter story what a fucking waste. 1 star

bshell47bshell47about 2 years ago
In appropriate

This is an incest story with a father and daughter loving..

I thought bringing an inter-racial person was not beneficial.

3 Stars

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Hello. I am back! I suddenly got that itch again. Right now I started writing a new challenging story. I have it published on Chyoa.com. I will be posting it here as well. I have been here for 20 years and I love to still hear your feedback. I hope everyone says hello sometime!

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