All Comments on 'Allen & Ashlyn: Spring Break Ch. 1'

Stopped reading with the woman hating. These stories were hot, until the abuse, violence, and lack of respect given to the hot daughter. Would love to have read more of making 'dad' out to be a great protector with the secret between the three of them.. I'm not a female, but I love and respect them. The kindness, caressing, and even the pussy pounding with daddy's cock was good enough.

The 1st two stories were the best so far.

Great story until the daughter was RAPED. How you turned a excellent story on it's ear is disgusting, a father willingly having his daughter both vaginally and anally RAPED will he watches and encourages is unforgivable and reprehensible. Totally disgusted with this chapter and the mind that thought it up. Yes, I know it's just a story, but the first 3 were excellent and romantic, then this chapter happened.

This story is in the wrong section. I do NOT enjoy abusing anyone. I'm disappointed, totally.

Loved the series until this part…😡

Until you took out the belt.