All Comments on 'Allen & Ashlyn: Winter Break-Christmas'

It was anusual story of dad and daughter, but interesting.

I love how you included a lot of details

This story of sweet love and compassion between a consenting adult father and daughter was one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. I can't wait to read the rest of this author's stories.

I have just started reading the series and it is FANTASTIC.

My only complaint was the action in the lingerie shop. I thought the friends brother eating Ashlyn and having her suck his cock was I'll placed. Until that time she was less experienced

And a virgin. The other girls were all experienced. They were sexual sluts.. Fucking a brother and a cousin as well as Each other. 69ing and multiple acts. Ashlyn should have been less of a tramp.

Still an excellent story.

could have done without the dressing room scene. 4 stars. sometimes more is not better.

HOTT!

Great story.

Loved it all.

I was concerned the guy in the might have taken her virginity, but it was safe for DADDY!

Can’t wait for the next chapter.