by whoruwhoami
I hope you will continue this story with out too much of a delay. It is a great story, I enjoyed it very much.
Very descriptive! Made my pulse race a few times..Please write more!
I just finished both stories. I must say they both have a feeling of reality to both. Am I wrong?
You are capturing and conveying a feeling of love and desire. A terrific read.
Fantastic second part. I hope you will write more parts to this story. Please do so soon.