by 1965Squash
Classic dilemma for a man in this situation, even one who isn't going through the trauma of separation and divorce. Looking forward to their further adventures.
The only obvious fault was the switch from third person to first.
It'll probably never be finished, like some of the others from this author. Don't waste your time.
A good start but it has been nine months since this was posted and further chapters are needed to complete this story. This tale seems to have fallen into same hole that so many stories do on Lit, and that is the hole of forever incomplete stories.