All Comments on 'Almost Lost'

nice story. AAA+++

Very interesting story! Enough twists and turns that warrants a second or third reading.

5

It is wonderful to see that you still serving such wonderful stories. I haew been offline for a while.

In my view, there is a nice story line, but the story is not done. Things are being touched in a much too superficial way. Three stars.

Really enjoyed the story until nearly the conclusion. The driving force compelling the actions was the criminal activity. This is then dismissed in a couple of sentences with little resolution.

The story was well written until the end - the various jail sentences being so mild is a black mark upon Australia. Also since she was a student under this professor; why wasn't the Professor's teaching credentials 'lifetime revoked'.

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Seems like the author was in a rush to finish the story with the last few paragraphs were rushed into a poor plot conclusions.

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3.6* barely, Hooyah

***Good read nice storyline. Thanks for sharing.

Duh! GBH is a date rape drug. It’s not a user drug. She was raped idiots!

The best part of this story was the humour. The storyline went flat, and the characters were given no depth. I love crime stories, …well not this one.

Taken as humour, can it be taken any other way? this is a 5.