All Comments on 'Alone Ch. 01'

Well written. Yes, a rookie would make the mistake of taking her eyes off a suspect and looking away. Hopefully there will be more to the story.

4 Stars. Good action-packed story, was the category of NonConcent/Reluctance picked for her roommate in college or intended to be for Jane in a follow-up chapter?

@LenardSpencer 9 chapters planned. Most already finalized and written.