All Comments on 'Alpha and Omega'

I hope this continues, you have the seeds of a nice world. I like the ghost friend, and possibility of many relationship growths.

Please sir. I want some more.

I don't know what to say this was great and you could definitely use the chosen one thing to your advantage and continue on with the story this is great

jpz007ahren said...

Part one had lots of potential, but Vampire Boffing and The Double Trap pretty much killed it.

Slut, orgy, BBC, transgender, furry, yaoi... too many fetishes to not squick eventually no matter how funny you make it. Almost like it was intended to turn almost anyone off at some point.

Ghosts and vampires and humpwolves, oh my! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.