All Comments on 'Alpha and Omega Ch. 03 Pt. 01: The Double Trap'
by DragonCobolt
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 7 years agoBtw, does this story's magic system use the Unknown Armies ruleset? I'm not super familiar with it, but the terminology you used (minor and significant charge) reminded me of it.
DragonCoboltover 7 years agoAuthorBruce has read and likes playing Unknown Armies - he...borrowed...the terminology.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe story started great then went to being sick, I know you've done much better than this.
LustKnightabout 5 years agoGlad I wasn't the only one to catch the Unknown Armies terms! Great game.
Sorry to see all the negativity seems to have pushed you into abandoning this story, I was rather enjoying it.
DragonCoboltabout 5 years agoAuthorI abandoned this because I have no idea how to actually conclude it >///>
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoYou can't leave us with a cliff hanger like that! Such a great story.
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou left sooooo much good stuff out and then ....just left us wet and horny for more. Sooo sad!
