All Comments on 'Alpha Boy Meets An Alpha Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

RonRon, big fan of your work and this concept is super hot (alpha male chastised). My only recommendation is to flesh it out more, felt very quick to arrive at locked in chastity, just zipped over the first 10 (!!) weeks of his chastity, and immediately cut to him cumming anally in the cage. I would like to see more detail, more teasing, more of her breaking him down, and more of his experience.

Thanks and look forward to your next story!

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Excellent

And I loved the ending, in which she admits that she had the key the whole time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What else....

is she lying about ?

thomas_deanthomas_deanover 3 years ago
The Less Than Tender Trap

What would a young, verile man do to have the most desirable girl? 20 year old Mike finds out that the most desirable girl comes at a hefty price. Will he pay it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think we need a sequel.

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