All Comments on 'Alpha Bravo Team Ch. 09'

sorry but no special ops person is going to take the time to talk about their later fuck session during an escape attempt.

So happy to see this chapter. Great job.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Please let there be one like, tomorrow .

Are we getting another chapter to finish off this story or is this the ending?

You have been posting many new stories of late and I may get around to reading them but what about this story? How about finishing this one! Or are you going to be like so many others on lit and just leave it unfinished and letting down all of us who took the time to read it.

I like this story, but does anyone else think that it's a little rushed? I mean Tanya just got there's now Micah is proposing? Mia and Romeo are in a war zone talking about love? All these things just happened way faster than believable, even in a story making it a little hard to swallow

Please finish the story. Don't keep us waiting months for another chapter :(

I also have been waiting for the next chapter. The heros are in a war zone and we the reader can't assume they will make it to the pick up zone in time!

This morning I thought to read your bio. Then I went to amazon to see if this story is complete there. I found your name and some of your books, but amazon is putting so much more listings in the results; results with one of your names but not both.

I have noticed a limited number of authors on Lit who will post links or information on where to find the full published story either at the end of a chapter, or in these comments section. I read on the android app, which does not show comments. I usually do not think to go to an author's bio.

Otherwise great story!

Please please please finish this story. Who is Micah? How does the team handle the new relationship?

Another stoey unfinished? Did something happen that the author quit?

More???

Sorry, but it gets a one for sucking me in and then leaving me hanging.

More will be coming soon. I have actually been writing again and have taken this one apart to finish it. Take care all!

Daniellekitten

Wendy Stone

I'm kinda confused by the Tanya /Micah romance, like.. it feels so tacked on and random. A strange man rolls up one day and is just like "hey I know your ex died yesterday and you have a metric ton of issues but we're gonna get married"

It's... Super awkward.

Can't wait for this to be finished.

Looking forward to the rest of the story. I see that it’s 5 months since Wendy said she was working on the next chapter. Hopefully it’s close to done and Wendy can share her wonderful work once again