All Comments on 'Alpha Chronicles Ch. 01'

A detailed foundation to what could a promising series. The character's description is credible and the sex was okay. I'd be interested to see what happen's next. Will Anthony become more dominant and hopefully dole out a few punishments? Will Elsie get her cumuppence?

Looking forward to see where you go with it ...

I loved it. I can't wait to read all of the chapters.