All Comments on 'Alpha Killer Ch. 16-20'

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Ryanwood405Ryanwood405about 5 years ago

Amazing 5 stars cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fiending

Too long a wait

tjb50caltjb50calabout 5 years ago
awesome story

may all those who have wronged her family. her pack , die a very pain full death. especially the council leader wolfe, and traitor alpha todd

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

That final scene? Pure badass, I loved it. Also, please don't do into additional detail of Tania's suffering, I've had enough, thank you. Let's spend the rest of the story tracking down a-holes and killing them.

partwolfpartwolfabout 5 years agoAuthor
Sorry about the delay

Story approval times can vary from 2-12 days and this one was the top of the scale. On Inkitt.com you can read the story by chapters posted five or more times a week.

PerryNormalPerryNormalabout 5 years ago
I told you so!

Thare ain't nut'n more fun than a badass, pissed off shewolf---with an aftermarket snap-on vampire attachment!

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PN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
brilliant!

Please carry this story on to its conclusion its simply fantastic!

wil2085wil2085about 5 years ago
sigh

ok since the 2nd chapter I've been wondering if rogues have any kind of legal protection or are pack members allowed to do whatever they want to them?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really wish most of each chapter wasn’t flashbacks.

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