All Comments on 'Alpha Killer Ch. 31-35'

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Ryanwood405Ryanwood405about 5 years ago

Amazing cant wait for more

5 stars

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

More great stuff. Looking forward to the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Talk about a Cliffhanger

I cannot believd you left it there, talk about sadistic .

NightsLongKnightNightsLongKnightabout 5 years ago
So will written.

This is an amazing store. It might be one of your best. I look forward to the growing store with the vampire council. You never seize to amaze.

ChanbadChanbadabout 5 years ago
No ok I NEED MORE

I will be checking daily in anticipation for the next chapter.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53about 5 years ago
Another excellent segment!!!!!

Definitely another excellent segment. Looking forward to the next installment!!

big65dawguwbig65dawguwabout 5 years ago
The Bite

Love the story as I have all of yours , but just have a question . If she shifted to her wolf would she still have her Vampire fangs & be able to deliver the venom ? She bite Alpha Justin in the fight & no mention was made at the time , but that might explain why she was so sure he wouldn't be healing , I would think the forms wouldn't be able to co-exist . I understand it's a vital part of the drama of the story line .It just sort of bugged me a little . Thanks

Moonshine1971Moonshine1971about 5 years ago
dang it

hurry with next one please! I want to know what happens

your one of my favorite authors.

PerryNormalPerryNormalabout 5 years ago
Yep! * * * * *

You ought to right one where Talia becomes the chief enforcer for the Wolf Council. She is a hell of a lot better at this scared straight stuff than the council is!

Good story.

PN

cmn456cmn456about 5 years ago
Great story!

Great story! I keep checking back so I don’t miss the next chapter,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS!

I'm on the edge of my seat now please finish the story it is truly a fascinating read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
5 stars

Fantastic! I cant wait for more.

wil2085wil2085about 5 years ago
hmm

only thing I can think of is that talia was told to somehow put her blood in his body as a way of slowing down the effects of the venom. oh and for the record raping an underage pack member is a crime, but raping an underage rogue is completely legal. chapter 6-10 page 4 says raping an underage rogue is not a crime.

BrazenpeachBrazenpeachabout 5 years ago
Fan-freaking-tastic!

Keeping me on edge but I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Why Randall doesn't die

When Randall first bit Talia to bond with her, he ingested some of her blood, which gave him a partial immunity to her saliva (increasing time before onset of symptoms), which can then be strengthened to become a full immunity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This would make a great screenplay... And movie...

-jaye-

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