All Comments on 'Alpha Killer Ch. 51-55'

ok so it's treachery to send people to capture somebody who is wanted for multiple counts of murder? plus nobody seems to care that Talia was used by the vampire council to kill were while she is a rogue. however when the council tries to capture her and jarrrod using rogues suddenly it's a huge deal. so what exactly is the difference?

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@Wil: I would think that one of the biggest fears for any Alpha would be that someone might gather a large number of rogues into a mercenary army and invade a pack, killing the his warriors and taking his women and children. This action threatens and frightens ALL pack Alphas. So by doing that, the council made a major political mistake. On the other hand, Talia is only a menace to very specific, misbehaving Alphas. So the bulk of the pack Alphas are going to lean that way.

Both are menacing and controversial, but "lone wolf killer," no matter how potent, is not as terrible a threat as "invading rogue army composed of violent mercenary wolves ejected from their packs for good reason coming here and raping our women and children."

Keep it going Partwolf you are an amazing writer. Thank you so much!

This is really one of the best stories / novels I've ever read, I really hope it continues for a long good time for multiple books but if anything happens before then can you just tell us this is where it ends. I've come across too many non-human and sci-fi stories on here that never seem to get finished and I would just like some closure. Thank you for being a badass writer and making a badass tale for me to follow

It is a pleasure to read your storys.

A 5 as always

Partwolf keep it coming .... awesome story and I can not get enough... Love it!

Is Denise his sister or daughter? Got confused there at the end.

That is Brent Meechum's daughter

I have loved the story so far - unfortunately, the idea of “everyone” suddenly finding mates is a bit off-putting because it’s too convenient in the most coincidental fashion. You are better than that so please.

Now how is Randall better trained than talia? Cops don’t train that hard. They don’t train like she has. All the different techniques mastered and fighting against full vampires. He bigger and stronger sure but it’s not possible to be better trained just with normal wolf and police force

Collecting packs like cards, love it

“No female [enforcers]? That shit would be changing.”

I get she’s meant to be super badass, and they are annoying old fashioned types.

But no, for warewolf enforcers who are expected to physically fight and overpower other ware wolves that completely makes sense. The Males are larger & stronger than the females.

Her own fight against her packs beta probably should have ended roughly the same no matter her age or training level.

If she hadn’t gotten the super blood that made her invincible.

But the other females don’t have super blood.