All Comments on 'Alright'

wow... extensive use of vocabulary. almost detracts from your story

Put the thesaurus down and walk away.

My interest in erotica is predicated on John Updike's reference to the 'lubricity between his wife's thighs' in "Poor House Fair." This was my first encounter with the erotic potential of words. Remarks about language seem oddly out of place here when most efforts are overrun with hyperbole, ridiculous surperlatives and are a very skinny hair above Gangster Rap -- the cultural equivalent of a Dick and Jane Reader -- two or three fucks, one suck and an allusion to sodomy. When I was child I did and thought as a child. Now that I am adult I like to read what adults think about sexually and sexuality.