All Comments on 'Altavie Brown Takes a Trip Downtown'

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 13 years ago
Fun Read

Nice little story about exploring what you pleases the main character. I enjoyed sharing the intense feelings of the narrator and her observations about what people may not see at times. Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow first story?

Hotter than some achieve in 50. Wish there was an Altavia on every Bus! With an eye for a deserving man. Or woman. That said I rarely use them. Steamed up: uk

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