All Comments on 'Altered Ch. 08 Pt. 02'

Fantastic story, deserves completion. Please continue this to a conclusion or FTDS finish it for you! Fantastic, yes, but a good read.

What a great tale one of the best way thanks for sharing your story but can ask is there an ending ?

I'll be writing it soon since I have more time. You can thank quarantine for that.

Looking forward to the completion of this series.

Love the story, not just about sex, lots of carater development. Really good.

SURE HOPE MAXIMUS CAN GET BACK TO WRITING A FINAL CHAPTER TO THIS STORY! EXCELLENT WRITING SKILLS.

I will be thrilled to read the rest of the story. Looking forward to it.

please keep writing this story it is one of the best I have read and I see that it's been well over a year since the last chapter was posted and the last comment from the author was written. we are all looking forward to you finishing

Thank you for reading my work. I do plan on finishing this story, but with Covid, having to work remote, and family issues its been tough to write anything. I did start to write something to finish off Chapter 8, but I didn't think it was very good so I'm waiting for some inspiration. Feel free to contact me anytime with any ideas, I respond to all email, good or bad.

please do more of this story i love it so far

Please for the love of God finish writing this story! I have been struggling through distractions but it has kept me hooked and coming back. You should be a published author. Aside from some minor mistakes in the edits it has been an amazing story

Sorry, with covid, a new house, a house remodel and work I haven't had a lot of time to write. However I do plan to pick it back up soon.

Glad to see you'll be returning to this one! And I hope all is going well with the house.

Really enjoyed this one and glad to see you've commented about why nothings happened, just hope you find the right inspiration to finish it. As someone who is writing their own big story, I'm hoping I don't run into the brickwalls so many seem to get stuck on.

Please don’t let this story wither and die. Get back to finishing it as soon as you can. This story is too good to let go.

How far are you from publishing the next instalment?

Scores 5/5

More please.

I have been working on it in my spare time but there is a lot of science that I need to get right with this. I actually have been studying the theory of relativity and had to go back to the drawing board on a lot of my ideas.

I am impressed with the quality of writing here. I like the mix of sci-fy in the story line. I hope this can be continued soon. Thanks

It's been 3 years. Hope you can do some updates to this story.

looking forward to more

This is an excellent story. As you say, it indicates "something" of your way of thinking!😃

My only suggestion would be to check for homonyms. It's easy to type the wrong word but spell it correctly.

Thank you for your work - it ain't easy and the pay ain't great!

unreal story , i luv syfy , i do hope that you can continue with this story , please , cheers

Feels like a lot of stuff got skipped over or rushed but I hope you come back and finish this.

I knew I should have looked at comments here first before reading this series. To bad it never got finished, it was a good story.

OMG! Please finish this series, I need to see what happens next!

Please continue the compelling story maestro! This is too good not to! Cheers!

uhg! now I got to save money to buy the book!