All Comments on 'Alternate Dimensions'

A great start to what could become a facinating tale. I like stories which push boundaries like this. I also like the fact that the naked women appear to be of normal intelligence as opposed to brainless as in other similar stories.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Pete.

Great start. Good characters. Don't stop now, please!

Please add more chapters. I love casual sex and you do a good job in your stories.

Thanks

Chapters?

We need a story here. This is only a teaser with no substance.

the writing is good and the story line is sound and plausible. This introduction ends with nothing.

The key to a good story is it mush come full circle. Finish the trip, or at least have them placing their hands on the box just before departure.

Please continue, got potential for a good story

I really hope that we more of this soon. The premise and writing are both great.

Please continue!

Hope to see more!

very interesting plot line

I suspect a mega twist at some point but so far very interesting

Please add more

Hey! What is that ending? Go write Ch02, immediately!!! :-))

You are one of my favorite authors. Please, make ch02 with them in City... please?

"To be continued?"

Please do. Personally, I'm not that into voyeur/nudity fetish, but I find myself very much enjoying your stories. And I really like science fiction so the whole alternate dimension aspect is intriguing.

At one point, Rebecca uses the word "misogamy", hinting that is a frequent character trait of conservatives in her home dimension. I believe that you have used the wrong word there. "misogamy" means "hatred of marriage", something that conservatives are not known for (in OUR dimension, anyway...). I believe that the word you wanted there was "misogyny", which means "hatred of women".

-Rei

I think your works has been stolen and posted on Amazon thought you should know incase it wasn't you who did it contact me.If you don't contact me I'll try to inform Amazon my self.

https://www.amazon.com/Fourteenth-Dimension-Marcus-Clayton-ebook/dp/B08NWDWV8G/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=the+fourteenth+dimension&qid=1606982055&sr=8-1

Where does it take them and especially her?

Fun story. I just finished reading and I got to say I loved this , it felt like I was watching an episode of Star Trek .

This is a really fun story. Can’t wait to read more. Thanks.