by talltails
Just too cute. No drama; going from point A to B and then to “Happy Ever After”.
You could add another chapter or two to your story. It's good but I can think of more possibilities to go along with your story...
Just perfect. I know that 25 can fall in love with 43 because I did it myself. We knew going in that there would be no HEA for us, but that didn’t change our feelings. I can’t think of anything that I would change in this story except for it to continue. Any chance of Ch 2? Certainly they have some family and friends to give them at least a bit of conflict/drama. Easy 5 stars.
I loved it! I honestly think this is one of the best stories I've read on this site. It was well written and the story line was a refreshing change from most of the others. I especially liked the part about her first orgasm! Cracked me up!
Well done!
Great story. Sexy and sweet. Marie has some very nice first time vibes. Keep it up!
Very nice story. I enjoyed reading it and seeing their tenderness toward each other.
Not sure if you are still writing but dang you are good. That was a wonderful story.
Thanks for sharing.