All Comments on 'Alternative Grad School'

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ccs29745ccs29745about 1 year ago

Loved this one and how he respected her and body. Keep up great work.

clackormanclackormanabout 1 year ago

Great story. It’s Wilkes-Barre, though…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just too cute. No drama; going from point A to B and then to “Happy Ever After”.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It's Wilkes-Barre with an 'e' on the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You could add another chapter or two to your story. It's good but I can think of more possibilities to go along with your story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

WOW!

Shit22Shit22about 1 year ago

Great one. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just perfect. I know that 25 can fall in love with 43 because I did it myself. We knew going in that there would be no HEA for us, but that didn’t change our feelings. I can’t think of anything that I would change in this story except for it to continue. Any chance of Ch 2? Certainly they have some family and friends to give them at least a bit of conflict/drama. Easy 5 stars.

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetroniusabout 1 year ago

A sweet story told with great tenderness. You have delighted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Outstanding,,, next chapter ?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I loved it! I honestly think this is one of the best stories I've read on this site. It was well written and the story line was a refreshing change from most of the others. I especially liked the part about her first orgasm! Cracked me up!

Well done!

Marvos79Marvos7912 months ago

Great story. Sexy and sweet. Marie has some very nice first time vibes. Keep it up!

NorthJerseyLearnerNorthJerseyLearner11 months ago

Very nice story. I enjoyed reading it and seeing their tenderness toward each other.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Very talented writer you are. A little Yoda humor.

oldtwitoldtwit10 months ago

Nice simple story, nice enough characters and the plot wasn’t bad.

SatyrDickSatyrDick4 months ago

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien42027 days ago

Not sure if you are still writing but dang you are good. That was a wonderful story.

Thanks for sharing.

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