by Dakota_North
That has got to be one the best short stories i have ever read! Loved it!
One of the best stories I've ever read. My compliments to you. I'll be sure to check out your others!
-The Rebel
What a great description of the first time. I remember fondly mine; a long time ago in a land far, far away.
Keep up the great work :)
Later,
Corinthlvr
That was so believably descriptive I wonder where the author got his material. Could personal experience be part of this? How true was your last paragraph: he realized no womans face would ever look that beautiful again.
This was fantastic!! Very graphic, yet sweet at the same time! I've read several of your stories, but I think this one's my favorite so far.