All Comments on 'Always A First'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
!!!!!!!!!!

That has got to be one the best short stories i have ever read! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
great story

very well written,thank you very much

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful!

One of the best stories I've ever read. My compliments to you. I'll be sure to check out your others!

-The Rebel

CorinthlvrCorinthlvrover 16 years ago
Loved It; Reminded me of my first time 38 years ag

What a great description of the first time. I remember fondly mine; a long time ago in a land far, far away.

Keep up the great work :)

Later,

Corinthlvr

gentilitygentilityover 15 years ago
exceptional

That was so believably descriptive I wonder where the author got his material. Could personal experience be part of this? How true was your last paragraph: he realized no womans face would ever look that beautiful again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

This was fantastic!! Very graphic, yet sweet at the same time! I've read several of your stories, but I think this one's my favorite so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Still a great story.

Time for a follow-up?

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