All Comments on 'Always Ask Permission'

"Say hello to my little friend."

Tbh, this was pretty rapey. In non-consent/reluctant that's fine but this isn't tagged as such and kinda threw me off. Well written and very descriptive though.

I tend to agree with you. However, Lit's systems do not allow for multiple categorisations. When I first submitted this chapter I asked the moderators if BDSM was correct in their opinion and asked them to move it if they felt it appropriate. In the end they left it where it was and I now think they were right. Her reluctance is ambiguous and unclear. The other alternative of Incest/Taboo also seems to be wrong. I hope it didn't entirely spoil it for you and you will continue to read my work.