All Comments on 'Always Ch. 04'

Such an enjoyable story, well told. A joy to read.

A thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you for all your hard work and for sharing it with us. 5 stars.

Great story!

5

Thank great Story, 5 stars. Hope there is more chapters.

Definitely 5 Kleenex

Love the story and characters. The sunrise in the West shows just how special they are.

Thanks very much

Well, I guess my editorial halo will need some Brasso polish. Thanks for catching this, TerrytheTraveler. LKilkenny will submit an edit for it ASAP. I guess we're in good company though. One of Larry Niven's Ringworld novels had the Earth revolving the opposite direction of what it actually does and it took months after publication for anyone to notice--among an audience of avid science fiction fans.

Wow 4.92... you need a pressurized cabin for the altitude your flying at...

I just wanted to say how entertaining this story has been so far. I hope this isn’t the last chapter in the series because I want to read more!

I guess if I was looking at something to critique it would have been Riley’s Mom in this chapter. Even estranged family comes together for weddings. I would have expected to hear more about her around the planning and the event itself.

If you do continue it would be nice for Steve to have a romantic path forward as well.

Thanks for the story so far!

I loved this. True Romance! May I suggest a future story where Riley's dad Steve finds a lasting love?

Loved the story love the characters! If you decide to take a break from this one or decide it has run it’s logical course, I could use another chapter of “Love For The Ages”. Yeah, I know I’m a nag but that’s what fans are for.

5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

Finish thier story with they having childern and thier friends getting married , this part feels like it is not complete and there's still something left to do.

I think you should pick this up with another series about this family. Maybe make it like the Sackets by Louis LaMour where you tell the story of generations of the family.

As others have said, don't stop here. We want more!

I absolutely loved this story.

I am a voracious reader and the best part of my day is to find a great new author. And guess what, you are it!

I agree with many others, keep up the story. Take us 10 years into the future and give us a glimpse into their lives.

You tell a great story, please tell the next chapter!

Excellent story,

Rightly finished here, but I'll join with others to call for another series centered around these characters. Top hole!

Just lovely!! One of the best stories I've read on this site. Looking forward to your future work. Mega kudos & five stars.

A lovely romance nicely done.

Loved this whole series! 5 stars!!!

I love reading stories involving great people with happy endings. Thank you.

Great to have a real feelgood story, without malice and spite for a change. I loved it. Thank you very much.

True love story!

Reading a story showing how beautiful love can be is exciting. Great story with just a touch of drama. Thanks for sharing.

DP

I love your stories & hope you have some more coming out soon

i've enjoyed the complete series so five stars all across the board

Do you have anything in the hopper waiting to finish up???

What an emotional loving story. This story of these two soulmates was well written and with such great passion and emotion and just enough drama it could be a Hallmark movie of the week. This author definitely can write a romantic love story one that is truly wonderful. I hope this author continues to write here as the stories are truly inspiring. Well done. 5+++++stars!

What a lovely story, more please!!!

Thanks for such a beautiful story that goes for all the chapters thanks again

Where did you go? More please.