All Comments on 'Always Nervous at Weddings'

Loved it, thank you.

A nice simple love story about how a good deed brought the giver an even greater gift.

It will be a joy to watch this new writer develop his talents.

The Hoary Cleric

Nice story. The changing verb tense bothered me. For example: "Her mother is interested. Francesca liked the idea of living closer to Lisa. She got an interview and came down to meet with the owner. She stayed at my place. It was good to see her."

Either "her mother was interested" or "Francesca likes the idea of living closer to Lisa...gets an interview.....comes down to meet......stays at my place.....is good to see her."

A couple of spelling errors (wlaked).

Perhaps I am too picky. Continue writing, please. You have a nice style and the story flows well.

Good story, but you moved too quickly from one couple to the next. You could have developed each couple in a separate chapter. Then you could go more indepth with how their relationships got started and progressed.

Nice little bit of mis-direction in the first lines!

5-stars

Very nice. Thank you

Read like a book report.

Nice, gentle story.

A 4 from me.

Nice story. Nothing too dramatic but just wholesome interaction.

Cute, smooth, 5 stars. Good lead in to more stories. Keep going.

Very nice indeed! You have a nice touch. Please keep writing. Five well deserved stars.

Delightful story!

5

Nice story.

Please keep writing. I'm looking forward to more.