All Comments on 'Alycia, Alcohol, and Abandonment'

Well written, it held my attention all they way to the end.

This hit each and everyone of my kinks, plus it was hot as hell. I loved the dirty talk in it and the fact that it's open ended. I would love to see if the relationship between Alycia and Dustin goes anywhere.

I have a difficult time finding domination stories that interest me, most are too brutal or just not terribly well written. This one is, by far, the most interesting and best written one I have come across. Great job!

You should definitely continue this to see if things work out with Dustin...a really great read....loved it!

Very well written, It was quite the revelation that it was her first! Surprised me in a very delicate fashion. I loved the story, just kinda want you to write more so she can tell them that was her first time! And get retribution/closire with Julia leaving her there! Did Justin know it was her first time then? Maybe I missed it... My vibrator was on and its very late, after all. ;) One very pleased girl twice over here, thanks! Keep writing!

~My_lil_Secret~

I hope Alycia and Dustin meet again.

Are you considering to progress with this story? I very much hope so. Please let us know!

DC

Thank you all so much for your feedback! I didn't originally have plans to continue this story - however, your response is making me reconsider. If I do return to Alycia and Dustin, it likely won't be in the non-consent category, however. Please keep an eye on my author page for potential updates!

I have read and voted on your Caging Cadence series, except for the most recent, and I loved your style of writing in those stories as well as this one. They ooze sensuality, raw sex, fear, revelation. Fun stuff. BUT....what I really wanted to comment on was your opening disclaimer. I read a lot of these stories and usually skip the intro legalities, but I really liked and appreciated yours. Thank you for sharing your lovely twisted fantasies with us.

I really hope you continue this story, I absolutely love it

The differences between Kyle and Dustin's personalities feels like a metaphor for the dualistic desire embodied in your stories. An abrasive sadist and a caring hedonist top. It's a really neat idea to embody those desires in two different characters, instead of having one character bear both traits and switch between them.

Overall, a wonderfully hot reluctance story.

I hope you continue to write, whether you post the stories here or not.

Don't feel pressured to continue any of your stories. Stories end, like all good things. Where this story ended is a particularly good point. Many possible outcomes are available from here, leaving your characters free to go down whichever paths seem most appealing in the imagination of your readers. A continuation would sever or block many of those paths.

Thank you for sharing your art with us.